Consumerium talk:Executive summary: Difference between revisions
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This is really really bad. It says nothing specific or concrete. It is full of abstract phrases that mean nothing. | This is really really bad. It says nothing specific or concrete. It is full of abstract phrases that mean nothing. | ||
:No. It is very clear terminology for executives and every sentence says something either about how things are in business now or how we hope to change how the business is. | :No. It is very clear terminology for executives and every sentence says something either about how things are in business now or how we hope to change how the business is. | ||
::No, it's bad writing. It's gone. | |||
It really must go. Picking good questions of the FAQ is a far better way to go | It really must go. Picking good questions of the FAQ is a far better way to go | ||
:No way. This is not going anywhere. --[[User:Juxo|Juxo]] 08:52, 28 Apr 2004 (EEST) | :No way. This is not going anywhere. --[[User:Juxo|Juxo]] 08:52, 28 Apr 2004 (EEST) | ||
::Fixing it. | |||