This is really really bad. It says nothing specific or concrete. It is full of abstract phrases that mean nothing.
- No. It is very clear terminology for executives and every sentence says something either about how things are in business now or how we hope to change how the business is.
It really must go. Picking good questions of the FAQ is a far better way to go
- No way. This is not going anywhere. --Juxo 08:52, 28 Apr 2004 (EEST)