This is really really bad. It says nothing specific or concrete. It is full of abstract phrases that mean nothing.
- No. It is very clear terminology for executives and every sentence says something either about how things are in business now or how we hope to change how the business is.
- No, it's bad writing. It's gone.
It really must go. Picking good questions of the FAQ is a far better way to go
- No way. This is not going anywhere. --Juxo 08:52, 28 Apr 2004 (EEST)
- Fixing it.